Opened 7 years ago
Closed 7 years ago
#3525 closed task (blessed) (fixed)
Rephrase wording in new about page, features section
Reported by: | flashbash | Owned by: | dd32 |
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Milestone: | Priority: | normal | |
Component: | General | Keywords: | |
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Description
This phrase needs rewording:
Create WordPress themes for clients, customers, and for WordPress users.
I suggest going with:
Create WordPress themes for clients and for WordPress users.
Change History (6)
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7 years ago
- Summary changed from Rephrase wording in new about page, section features to Rephrase wording in new about page, features section
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7 years ago
- Owner set to dd32
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While I don't see any issue with the wording, I'd also like to see it have some kind of "or for yourself" phrasing in there as well.
I'm chasing this up to find out what (if at all) the text should change to.
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7 years ago
Replying to dd32:
While I don't see any issue with the wording, I'd also like to see it have some kind of "or for yourself" phrasing in there as well.
I'm chasing this up to find out what (if at all) the text should change to.
I actually stumbled upon this while translating. I'm not a native speaker, but at least in German, clients and customers would be the same, even if I use synonyms. So there's this weird double mention of customers...
Having it mention "or for yourself" as well is actually a great idea!
I'd get rid of "clients" too. That's a weird word to have in a community site.